Feedback on BETA2 Release (June 30, 2009)

Jul 21, 2009 at 8:16 AM

Hello,

I noticed some minor typographical errors in the BETA2 release that came out on June 30:

  • Page 21: "Figure 2" label is split across lines. Probably needs a preceding linebreak.
  • Page 21: "One way to combat this is to break the project into increments of functional ."
    Should that be 'functionality', or is there another word missing?
  • Page 23: "Figure 4" label is split across lines.
  • Page 23: "If the product owner finds bug, the developer fixes it as soon as possible"
    Should that be 'If the product owner finds A bug'?
  • Page 23: "Figure 6 - Multi-Release Agile Project illustrates an agile project with two releases"
    I think that should be referring to Figure 5, rather than Figure 6.

Pretty minor stuff, but I know it's these small things that become invisible once you've been working on something for a while so I thought it worthwhile to point them out.

I'm only up to Page 23 right now, so I'll report any further suggestions in this thread as I come across them.

Regards,
Daniel Fortunov

Sep 3, 2009 at 3:24 PM

Page 30: What are "Wizard of Oz" tests?